“About three things I was absolutely positive. First, Edward was a vampire. Second, there was a part of him – and I didn’t know how potent that part might be – that thirsted for my blood. And third, I was unconditionally and irrevocably in love with him,” (Meyer, 195).
I cannot begin to express how much I dislike the romantic element of this story. Let me be the first to say that, so far, I can at least partially enjoy the story of Twilight. However, I believe that the romance aspect is my least favorite part. Stephanie Meyers uses this budding relationship wonderfully as a tool for storytelling, using the question game Bella and Edward are playing as a way to painstakingly pull exposition from the overly reluctant Edward, as well as to make us as interested as possible in who these mysteries supernatural people are. However, I feel as if the story would be much more interesting without the romance and if it were told from Edward’s perspective. When I discovered that Edward was a mind-reader, I thought, “wow, I would love to see how that works,” which I can’t do, because this story is told by Bella, a girl who constantly calls herself ordinary.
Now, I get that using Bella as the narrator gives the reader a way to experience a world that they have never been apart of alongside a person who is going through the same transition. This is something that I believe this story does not need. The setting of the book in placed in enough of a normal world that most would be able to understand it. Adding in Edward’s perspective would be just as much of a mystery as from Bella’s perspective. If having the reader experience the newness with the narrator was so important, then just use Jacob. He seemed so skeptical about those tribal stories, having them come to life before his eyes would have been just as interesting as coming to the realization with Bella. I honestly do not think that Bella is a necessary character in the story. If her whole “I’m immune to mind-reading” thing is actually a story plot, then, again, just move that to Jacob, because that would be so much more interesting!
Again, I’m okay with the story itself, but what I am not okay with is how the story is being told. Take Bella and just press that big old DELETE button on your keyboard, Stephanie Meyers. If you need romance so bad, just ship Jacob and Edward, who are the only two characters I genuinely like at this point.